Friday, July 9, 2010

Alice's Story


At Aunt "Jessa's" suggestion, I decided to start a journal with Dani and ask her to help contribute in various ways. Today we wrote a story together. I will underline my additions that were used to help move the story along or clarify things.

Alice's Story

Once upon a time there was Alice hop hopping to my bed. Alice is a princess who likes to hop like a bunny. She found a monster in my room, a big, yellow, furry monster named Elsy Belsy. Alice ran to her house to hide in her kitchen. The monster was too big for Alice's house. So, he couldn't chase after her. Alice was mad at the monster because the monster took her bed suit and put it up on the basket. Alice was having a baby and the monster took her three babies. Alice asked Flamingo to get back her babies and get back her swim suit. Flamingo used her rope to catch the babies and her swim suit. Alice, Flamingo, and Ladybug used nets to catch the three swim suits. Flamingo and Ladybug changed the three babies into swim suits. Then, they changed the monster into a yellow swim suit, and they turned the pillows into a red swim suit. Bolt caught the babies and Alice's swim suit. He used his long nose to catch them. Everyone was happy.

The End
This pictures shows the main characters in Dani's story (Bolt, Ladybug made from a balloon, Alice, and Flamingo).

It is interesting to note that her characters often are pregnant and will at times have "tractions" (contractions). So Alice having babies was not surprising. You can see we are getting ready for August.

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